Story Title : 3/5

It's a cute and nice name and it is matching to the storyline, however it is very common to have a title like that. Words like 'dorky' are always used. Try a title like "The Chicken Loving Imbecile That Lives Next Door". It gives a different feel. I know it's heard to think of titles and your title is quite cute, but try to use more descriptive words other than common words like kind and dorky.

Appearance [Background and Poster] : 10/10

Your poster is quite cute and appealing to the eye. The colors may grab some readers' attention. All your main characters are there and the quotes tell us what the story is about. Although it could be a little brighter, it's still good.

Forewords : 6.5/10

It is a very alluring story description you have. It made me want to read your story very much. It is nice, but it could be improved with more description to how Onew teases Eunmi and more details in terms of why they are crushing on who they are crushing on. How did they meet? Although I like the storyline, details are important and the storyline is a bit cliché. Some people may not like that. The story is quite alright though, because that type of story is popular with many people.

In your foreword, it contains only your characters and what they are about. Although it is quite alright, you need to describe them a little bit more - about their character. Maybe paragraph form would help, but again, some people like that styled formatting. So I won't mark down a lot because of my personal preferences. You could add a small teaser there to try to get people to see your work before they leave, just in case they would have left before actually seeing anything. Who knows, they may read it only after reading that teaser.

Plot : 14/15

Although there is only one chapter at this time, it is completely hilarious and cute like I had expected. Your readers all seem to like your story. It is very interesting and cute and I wish that I could continue reading. Your chapter left me wanting for more, just like what stories are supposed to be like.

I hope for it to continue as it seems to capture my attention. It is very easy to follow and it will be very popular with other readers. It is very funny. You could use a little help with describing things a little more, but the story is so interesting that it over powers that.

Characterization : 10/10

I would say perfect points for now. You really show how your character is all about. I can see your character's personality really easily and quickly. I'll see how it develops as your story continues.

Creativity/Originality : 6.5/10

There are so many stories about falling in love with your neighbor. It is used over and over again, but your scenes are very creative and sweet. To keep the readers reading, you need to figure out how to make the rest of your future chapters interesting and fun to read. So be careful or you'll lose readers.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary : 9/10

Overall, I only saw one mistake which was probably caused because you accidentally hit the letter "a", but still, you need to remember to go over your chapter after your done to check for errors.

The error is contained in paragraph 26 of your first chapter.

"I'll be dowanstairs if you need me," needs to be corrected. I won't mark it much against you because it is just a typo, many people accidentally hit buttons they don't mean to. Grammar is average and vocabulary is used well.

Flow : 8/10

I think your story is moving smoothly, although I would recommend for you to slow down and describe a bit more. I thought it was going a little too fast, but you need to also be careful with this. If you go too fast, people may not want to continue, but don't be too slow either, it causes the same thing. It is very easy to follow though.

Writing Style : 10/15

It is fine, but pictures aren't always appealing, so contain it in a link or so. It might just be my personal opinion. Each and every one of your paragraphs are too short because you aren't describing enough. Descriptions are important! Please remember not to use much dialogue that it throws me off because I want to read about how the characters are feeling, what they are doing, what they like, etc. Show off some more about the rest of your characters!

The format is nice, but remember not to make the colors too bright, it may blind the readers. Please mind that the colors aren't necessary, but if you are using colors, make them pastel colors or darker colors so it won't hurt they eyes.

Also mind that abbreviations may be funnier than writing out the words, but writing it out is more appealing. You may keep the abbreviations as I didn't mark it against you.

Overall Enjoyment : 5/5

I love these types of stories and it is really interesting to read. I like the way you use your character's personality and the ways you show them off. It is very funny and I would like to keep one reading. It is a very nice story compared to others of its similarity.

Total : 83/100

Bonus : 2/5

It is very nice to read although I marked some points off. I would like to add extra points. I usually find most SHINee fanfictions very similar to each other and boring, in a way, its storyline was similar to many other stories, but you made it in your own special way that brings you extra points. I won't add more than two because I believe that you could do much better. I am very strict about describing things. You did a nice job and I hope to read more. I also hope for you to improve by this.

Overall Total: 85/100